Kerri Dawn- When you wake up

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By Loladusk

When you Wake up


When you wake up in the middle of the night.

You look out the window, did you see something just out of sight.

Is that scratching or clawing some-thing outside.

Yes, they can fly just don’t let them in, it’s the question they ask and your choices are slim.

Think again forever young, a chance to live! or are you numb.

You may never know, the choice is yours.

All you do is open the door, in the middle of the night and wish out loud with no fright.

They will come and take you away into the night to never see day.

You look in the mirror and what do you see, your reflection is gone you no longer be.

You belong to the night no sunshine no light.

Are you sure what you want there’s no turning back.

The morning is coming and I have to get back.



Comments

molometer profile image

molometer Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

I am guessing, vampires? this is a well put together poem and it kept my captive all the way through. Well done.

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lord de cross 3 months ago

I agree with molometer,

You have such a way to keep us to the end. fromk dusk to dawm...there is something that must be done..! Voted up!

LORD

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Highvoltagewriter Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Interesting it makes me want to read more!

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Loladusk Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you, I hope you will continue to read more as I post them, I am really enjoying it, I have rea more in the last few days than in the last 4 months! It wonderful! Thanks again.. look forward to more of your comments... Cheers KDLD

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Loladusk Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you, I will be posting more! For sure I am really liking this venue. Looking forward to your future comments!!! Enjoying your work as well! Cheers KDLD

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Loladusk Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you, yes Vampires.. just figuring all this out, enjoying Hubpages and your page was very helpful for me, Thanks for the comments too :), I look forward to writing more and recieving more comments Cheers KDLD

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